Draft

[asdr83]

Love
The boundaries of his love are sharp
The edges pain me
Burning Biting into my soul
I grind them smooth to fit with mine
And I watch as he sharpens my edges
To fit with his

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Roulette

[learnedax.livejournal.com]

The boundaries of his love are his
The edges pain mine
Burning Biting into my edges
I grind them smooth to fit with sharp
And I watch as he sharpens my soul
To fit with me

Re: Roulette

[asdr83.livejournal.com]

Hmmm, I may like your version better than mine. Still deciding.